I wants to say

The first book is done, honestly, as my brother said.

The writing quality is not so good.

I'm afraid that some people don't know the plot of this book, so I will briefly say it again.

"Brian met a man on the way home trying to kill a woman. His sense of justice tended to knock the man out, save the woman, and then meet the man in the school's discipline office. In order to avoid the ending of being silenced, Brian knocked out again. He then passed out himself.

Alicia helped Brian find the man's identity but found no results, so they guessed that the man was a cyborg, and making cyborgs is illegal, so they began to investigate and finally determined through Hudson that the murderer was the UMBRELLA company, but Michael wanted to sneak in. However, Brian was forced to face the past that he least wanted to face in that battle.

However, Michael killed the mayor, who instructed him to make an artificial man behind the scenes, and found Brian and asked him to have a duel with him. In the end, Brian lost, and Michael was solved by Brian's friends.

Michael is thrown in jail and later recruited by Hudson to be "secret". "

If you are a smart person, you must have noticed the logical loopholes in it.

1. When a man wants to kill a woman, Brian chooses to knock the man unconscious to save the woman. However, when Brian encountered the man again in the school's discipline office, he beat him unconscious again in order to avoid being silenced. This continuous behaviour seems somewhat unreasonable, which is why Brian did not choose to call the police or use other more appropriate methods to deal with this problem.

2. Alicia could not find out the identity of the man through investigation but guessed that he was an artificial human and then launched an investigation into Umbriella. This inference seems far-fetched because there is no solid evidence to support this speculation.

3. It is mentioned in the description that Michael killed the behind-the-scenes man who made the artificial man, that is, the mayor. However, why did the mayor order the manufacture of artificial humans, and what is the relationship with the UMBRELLA company?

4. Michael finds Brian and invites him to a duel. However, in the end, Brian lost, and Michael was dealt with by Brian's friends. Not enough information is given here to explain why Brian's friend would address Michael, nor the background and relationship between them.

5. Michael is thrown in jail and recruited by Hudson to be "secret". The twist seemed to come out of the blue without providing enough context and explanation as to why Brian was in jail and why Hudson recruited him.

However, I still enjoyed the process of reading this book.

My favourite part is from "Midnight Showdown" to "The Secret Alliance", which is also my brother's favourite part.

I hope I can provide you with better stories, better characters, and a broad world view. Thank you for your support.

Please also write about your favourite character in the review, and then I will describe more about the mental journey of this character.