Flame Within
In a world of medieval politics and warfare, Hayden, the abandoned son of Baron Laurence Pendragon, is forced to confront his painful past and forge a new future. Born out of wedlock to a maid and a baron, Hayden has spent nine years imprisoned in the servant quarters of the Pendragon estate, haunted by memories of his mother's death and his father's rejection.
As Hayden is suddenly thrust into the outside world, he finds himself at the mercy of the crown.
Drafted into military service, Hayden must navigate treacherous alliances, battle-hardened warriors, and his own demons.
With his intelligence, cunning, and determination, Hayden sets out to reclaim his rightful place in the world and exact revenge on those who wronged him. But as he embarks on this perilous journey, he discovers that his past is only the beginning.
This is the author here. I came here to leave a shameless review on my own book and to also ask for guidance from all of you. I am trying to write a pretty decent book and because of the time I spent away from writing and reading, I am sure I made some glaring errors. please comment on the book, telling me where I went wrong and what I can do to make it better.