The Mockery of Fate

Hi everyone! It's my first novel, and I'd really appreciate your support and any comments on how to improve my writing! Thanks [img=recommend]

I found the story quite interesting at first. I liked the character and his characteristics. I hope that when I read the next chapters, I can better understand the relationships made by the character.

I kinda like Cheryl she has a very interesting character. Overall the story is great, the flow is nice, no lengthy explanations at the start - the readers are thrown into the action right away. Good job author keep writing!

The writing is ideal and the plot intrigue.It definitely keeps you on your toes.I recommend it !

Really love Cheryl. Quality of writing is top tier and it makes you want to read on. The latest chapter ended on a "calm before the chaos". Can't wait to see how it progress. We need more chapters! Repeat important things 3 times: "MORE, MORE, MORE!" (Jokes aside please update at your own pace).

I love the thrill i get from reading this. It just picks up from the first chapter. I already added to my library... i so want to know what happens next. This is a really good work author.

Top quality writing, no doubt about it. The cover to the story adds such a flavor to the entire package of this story. I can't wait to see how this further develops.

This is top-quality writing with an author who definitely cares about presentation this needs more chapters

Only four chapters and I am so much into this novel. Really loving it. The background, character everything is so well developed . [img=update]

Only four chapters but it's really good so far. We have this really lively, adventurous, young MC, Cheryl, who seems to have a penchant for getting herself into scrapes, and getting out of them as well (she's no damsel in distress type!) Then we have Vlad, I have all kinds of questions about Vlad! I'm looking forward to getting the backstory to Cheryl and Vlad and just how it is that they know each other, and where are they going? Looking forward to seeing more!

An interesting plot, a beautiful description of the places and the presentation of the plot, interaction with secondary characters is a certain mystery from the beginning of the novel, but it is still not clear how magic fits in here and who is the main character's companion? I hope the author will gradually introduce the readers to the course by adding new chapters :)

It is fast paced, but the characters seem nice this far and I could see hints of some interesting themes (let’s see if I am right)