The Legacy of Merlin

The Legacy of Merlin

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Author: Jumpin316
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Harry Potter, born into a rich and noble house spent his entire life shunned for being less than his younger sister Gloria 'Glory' Potter, the girlwholived. All of this changed when Harry solved a puzzle that mystified the wizarding world for more than a thousand years. He would no longer be a footnote in his sister's story. He would walk a path that would change everything.

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Zizinho21
Zizinho21

Writing = 2 Bad tropes badly done, ooc characters for no reason, lack of actions based in logic but fanfic so... Updoots = 3 Seems frequent enough Development = 2 I feel like I've read at least 10 stories that follow the same track/recipe. Characters = 1 Reading your characters gave me suspension of disbelief, their actions illogical and ill thought in execution, repercussion, reasoning and delivery. World = 3 it's HP so there's that.

a year ago
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jubileu_tv
jubileu_tv

Cara eu entrei achando que era uma fanfic de Harry Potter mas vc foi muito além vc pegou um fundo e criou uma história totalmente nova e muito boa vc deveria escrever um livro dessa narrativa

2 years ago
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ArSolaris
ArSolaris

It's honestly one of, if not the best HP fic I've read it's phenomenal, and written extremely well.Please author, don't drop this thing.

a year ago
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Sid_Nite
Sid_Nite

this is very good story to read and aside from minor behavioral pattern of characters which some may like and some may not and only thing which author can improve is the change in pov you can add~~~ or just woosh or anything to show that as it helps readers understand when pov is changed

2 years ago
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kiseeco
kiseeco

One of the absolutely phenomenal work I read in web novel of an Harry Potter fanfiction. 🤩🤩 absolutely recommend reading it.

6 months ago
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alesjandritos
alesjandritos

Me gustó mucho el trabajo del autor, Muy buena lectura, esperando con ansias todos los capítulos futuros [img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización]

a year ago
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