Still waiting for the bad guy
If any is there
I hope
But still kinda good.
Kinda, cause there are better on the platform
But out of the new ones ist pretty good
2 years ago
1
Sosnowicz_XD
Almost daily
Almost
Good beginning, have to get into the story to read further.
But nice, names are weird , story gets better with time
Ummmm
idk what more
2 years ago
1
def_a_real_man
Beggining is meh, probably starting author.
It slowly and slowly gets better.
But slowly.
and short chapters and dividing chapters is problem
But quotes tho,
2 years ago
1
LettuceContinue
Daily updates, nice pace of developement , not unecessary dialouge or over explaining everything
Some minor mistakes in writing but still pretty nice.
except the beginning, that can be skipped.
2 years ago
1
random_guy_bruv
Not the best writing style but still can get into the story. still nothing happened though
Still waiting for the bad guy If any is there I hope But still kinda good. Kinda, cause there are better on the platform But out of the new ones ist pretty good
Almost daily Almost Good beginning, have to get into the story to read further. But nice, names are weird , story gets better with time Ummmm idk what more
Beggining is meh, probably starting author. It slowly and slowly gets better. But slowly. and short chapters and dividing chapters is problem But quotes tho,
Daily updates, nice pace of developement , not unecessary dialouge or over explaining everything Some minor mistakes in writing but still pretty nice. except the beginning, that can be skipped.
Not the best writing style but still can get into the story. still nothing happened though