When The Moon Tilts West
**** Only 17+ are allowed, more steamy scenesare included in this novel. Read on your own risk . Please Enjoy. ****
Cassie Claudel, the despised of the Duchy of Deorc. The employees of the mansion gave her the cold shoulder.
While the Duke’s adopted son, Ace Deorc, have sex with her continuously. Then, one day, the Duke’s successor, Jack Deorc, returns from the battlefield— The man Olivia had a terrible crush on.
The joy of reuniting with her crush lasted for a moment. That is until Leonard finds out about Olivia’s relationship with Ace “Is it true that you said you couldn’t live without a man?” Jack’s words left her in a deeper abyss. It was because no one can prove it even if it is not true…
Will this man believe in her even if she says she’s innocent? She already knew that would never be the case. “What are you going to do?” “….” “Why? Are you going to replace Ace?” As Olivia’s eyes were about to tear up, Jack’s voice could be heard again. “I’m willing to.” “What…?” “I mean, I’ll satisfy you instead of him.
So, don’t do that with my brother anymore.” His face was as serious as it could be. Although her face was filled with confusion, he went out of the room as if he had killed. “I’ll come back when the moon tilts west.”
I think the detailing in this story is very well done. I also enjoy the fact that there is a deep backstory to help give the characters some more depth.
Only 2 chapters uptil now so can't say much about it, but the writing is pretty good, no grammatical errors and the Author quickly told the story of the FL so that was interesting to read. I can't wait to find out what happens next between her and Jack ^.^
The story begins very hot.Wheeeew you got me sweating seriously.I hope your story really makes it big, it makes one crave for more. Well done
I didn't get the plot after reading the synopsis but the first chapter was a blast and I think I can guess what's going to happen. The story is still in its early stages so there isn't much to say but you have a great writing style author and I hope you keep it up!
So far the story appear interesting, and looking forward to the characters, also the writing is great and the story structure is also good just keep it up
A captivating story with an enigmatic protagonist. The author's skillful storytelling brings Cassie to life, weaving together her complexities, strengths, and vulnerabilities. The descriptions are evocative and the dialogues well paced. A great story...
I'll admit, I don't typically read this type of novel, but this pleasantly surprised me. The quality of its writing is excellent. And, there is a perfect balance of dialogue and prose, which you don't see so often.
it's such a great story and it start with steamy scene it makes me sweat💦💦
Oh my. The first chapter certainly had some spice. The descriptions are done well, and the world building as well as the backstory for the characters are really good, like really good. I quite love it, actually. Hope to see more of this steamy novel. 👉👈
Wow What a good story the starting are rough but it get's more intresting from chapter 2 Well character's are awesome and also plots [img=recommend]
the plots are well placed and it seems interesting i hope it get updated sooni am really excited for chapter 3
The first chapter looks like it was torn out of the subsequent chapters. Chapter 2 conveys the story of the characters and their experiences well, "Fears" was interesting to read. And for 2 chapters it is impossible to assess in what direction the novel will move, I hope the author will continue to write for a better understanding of the world and, most importantly, the goals of the main character.
It's a great novel and all the plots are care fully places. I can't wait to read it's next chapter. I'm very curious about next chapter[img=update]
The beginning chapter definitely immediately catches your attention, I love it! To be able to transition to such a tragic backstory, and keep me reeled in is very impressive. Great read!
this story had no grammatical mistakes which I hate most. well this story is fantastic however it's such a steamy story. I really like the characters and specially setting. I hope it's keep going