11 Standoff

different vibe to other stories out now really like your hope you keep posting 🫶

cool concept approach, likeable enough, keep working hard[img=fp]

This sci-fi adventure story creates an immersive world and casts the reader right into the action as Jen and his allies wake up captives in an alien arena. The imaginative challenges they face are described vividly, from dangerous maze puzzles to a planet filled with exotic wildlife. The relationships forged between the characters feel organic, especially as we learn more of their backstories like Yuna's tragic childhood. The villain Lizayon is suitably menacing as the cruel, godlike being forcing them to compete in his games. The story keeps upping the stakes and twists, like the revelation that they've been thrown into an alternate reality where Lizayon rules supreme. Overall, this is a gripping tale with well-developed characters undergoing engaging trials that constantly push the plot forward. It balances raw action with poignant emotion resulting from the trauma these survivors endure.

Cool stuff, can't wait support from Norway

This story is an exciting and unpredictable adventure, with a diverse cast of characters that jump off the page. Jen, Liya, Kaganji, Kilguy, and the rest of the group are well-developed and relatable, with unique personalities and powers that add depth to the narrative. The world-building is imaginative and well-realized, with a intriguing premise that kept me guessing until the very end. Highly recommended for fans of science fiction and adventure stories.

new concepts, nice esque, keep rolling the ch. out