A King’s World

Not exactly a shameful review, just answering questions potential readers may have. Q) What is this about? A) This story follows Leonidas II, a fifteen-year-old demigod, who valiantly died in his past life in a huge war, between the Olympians, Giants and the Titans. Due to his lineage, he yearned to rule over his own kingdom, and that thirst led him to meeting with a deity. After forming a double-edged deal, Leonidas is reincarnated into a different realm, teeming with enigmatic creatures and kingdoms; though this time, he enters the world as a fifteen-year-old. Q) Will there be a Harem? A) No, only one love-interest. Q) Will the MC be overpowered? A) In the first few acts, he will be a bit weaker compared to some. However, he soon becomes an indomitable force as the story progresses. Q) How long will this story be? A) I don't have a set chapter in mind, but it should be decently long. Q) How consistent do you update? A) Once or twice per day. Q) Why did you give yourself five-stars? A) I'm going to be honest; this story is great. It has a different approach on some magical aspects, it has war, it has Empires, it has bloodshed; what more is there to want? All jokes aside, this story is good, and as an author, I'm proud of it. You will like it, and if you don't please let me know what I can do to fix it. Q) Why should I read this? A) Because you read this entire review :) Might as well and jump into this story!

I love the detail you put in when you explain the violence and gore. You capitalize on it very well. The fights and the flow of your story sink you right in. You do however use weapons that I have never even heard of before especially in the first chapter, I had to look several things up just to know what someone was using. I like how you put information in for some of the bigger names like demigods, Aphrodite. It helps people grasp the names of important figures in your story. You have something really good here and I will be adding it to my collection to see where it goes!

The story has a dark and mature setting, though it's not my cup of tea I really find it interesting especially since I'm working on a novel with a similar concept (Greek setting, Gods, demigods and such)Have me sold two chapters in

this got a decent potential to grow more sending you stones 👍👍 keep it up author

This is a hidden gem! Reading the first chapter, the scenes all appeared picturesque and not very difficult to imagine. The writing is superb as the usage of words was very fluid and smooth. All in all, this was done very well and I'm looking forward to the future chapters! Don't drop this book, author! Your work is good and I'm sure, readers like me, will have fun reading this gem

good details and background, nice work, keep it up

Good novel from what I read. I clicked on it because I used to have a novel on here with my MC as Leonidas. I added this to my library later --> seems interesting though.

This story is off to a powerful start. The Story is clear with it's direction and the world. Everything about the story was written well. I hope to see more from this story.

great job of creating a unique world filled with magic, war, and adventure. But The writing style is kind lackluster, with the pacing feeling slow and plodding, even with that i enjoyed it

The story is good. Its pace is not slow and grammatically correct. Its just that the MC's behavior is little unsettling as it seems he has not understood his present situation, maybe author will make him mature as the plot develops. Overall, a must read story with a proper world background.

The Author did a great job when it comes to story telling. The novel is interesting. I am hooked.Keep up the good work author.

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I think some verbs are not conjugated, as some words were missing alphabets. When also Leonidas was talking to the army commander some words could be used that could make their sentence be more easier to read. The novel is amazing at explaining details of character, environment and situations, but sometimes its explaining to much. it has a amazing start that and has a very good potential so continue with your good work❤️ ❤️❤️