It was a story about a girl who is coming from her work then she meet a creepy voice stalker but he is not a stalker then after a while they meet again and that boy change seoul life.She get into another world,she have to finish tasks to come back to her world again.
Your novel was good but you have to work a little and explain everything that we can understand.Explain about you character more, every single details so it can help us and you to.