It’s easy to read for English readers who don’t really require commas and the like, the words used are advanced so people complaining are probably not native speakers or are pea brains who require such things to understand intended meaning. this is 1000% more palatable than the Chinese Mtl garbage that usually gets posted.
2 years ago
22
Lukeskydrinker
This isnt soo bad like other say,first he is born 900 years before story so what?he would go to sleep and bum meet Harry Potter?better if he make some legends in history to make impact in main story
2 years ago
20
Nates_UserName
hes deleted everything to if your looking for the book gl
a year ago
8
MrSimo
the book is good some of the religious stuff kinda bugged me, but I don't really care to be fair. the book is quite easy to read I don't know why people are Complaining. it was a fun and hopefully will continue to be a fun read.
2 years ago
6
ShadowTime
i stoped at around chap 20. not that its bad but i just felt lost with all the info thrown around. the story is really good and a must read and there is a lot of in depth info on magic that i find interesting and pretty cool.tho i would recomend author to put like a word explination to terms and names that some people might not know, understand or ponounce cus there were a few terms i did not understand and didn't fell like looking up(my problem, not yours).
2 years ago
6
humpedumpe
i dont agree with the negative reviews, it is a good story, what more can i say.
so troll dont give negative review,
it is worth the read
2 years ago
4
Finnish_man
I love this its very good it dosent feel like a harry potter fic so if u want some harry potter stuff thats related to plot so its not that but thats why it so good its not like everyother HP ff thats why i like it so much and it very high quality most stuff do make sense in the story and the translations good quality in my opinion tho its not my native so i cant say anything for the native speakers but at least for me who dosent speak it nativly find very few mistakes most are just wrongly translated and thos arent that bad like i have read much worse so i dont car my own englhis aint that good neihter is my own launage so like lol but would definetly recomend to read for all who migth like a harry pitter fic thats more on au but still has the core of harry potter better than most harry potter fics that have marvel/mcu most of the are kinda bad cus i feel like hp magic dosent go that well with mcu tho its bit difrent if the fic is a template fic or gacha sytem vut in the end lool
AUHTOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 💀
2 years ago
4
ARSENAL_101
I like the setting of the story and the update speed is also good (at ch 31)Though there are some obvious written issues and a lot of exposition(like more than the actual dialogues) I hope the story gets completed if nothing else. don't leave the story hanging and improvement is much appreciated.
2 years ago
4
minion1
This is one of the more in-depth world building works I have read, it develops multiply factions instead of ’enemy faction crush’ good work mate keep going plz
2 years ago
3
PrimordialMofu
I really enjoy this but the writing and dialogue structure is a chore to read and comprehend. I struggle to see where the dialogue starts and ends, it's really the only bad thing I can say about the book, besides the fact the MC is supposed to be the first Archmage in centuries and keeps meeting people more powerful than him.
2 years ago
3
Skull_of_Life
Hello everyone, as for the translation, I want to say that it is quite normal, it can be worse. As for the novel itself, if someone expects to see here a snake that devours everything it sees, this is not the case here, and also gg is rather boring and uninteresting, I know for myself, I read the original about half a year ago or so. So I do not advise fans of villains and interesting characters to read, forget quickly, and after reading there will be a lump of disappointment from the fact that you have spent your time on this at all.
2 years ago
2
Black_Sakyra
Like this>:3
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2 years ago
2
Stanie_Thomas
I enjoyed this very 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2 years ago
2
ANNU_BARANWAL
A masterpiece to me, how others felt, who cares. The way a lot of different topics are blend together leaves a nice taste
2 years ago
2
Demiurge_Kami
Give it three chapters, if you enjoy a fresh take on HP you will not regret it.
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It’s easy to read for English readers who don’t really require commas and the like, the words used are advanced so people complaining are probably not native speakers or are pea brains who require such things to understand intended meaning. this is 1000% more palatable than the Chinese Mtl garbage that usually gets posted.
This isnt soo bad like other say,first he is born 900 years before story so what?he would go to sleep and bum meet Harry Potter?better if he make some legends in history to make impact in main story
hes deleted everything to if your looking for the book gl
the book is good some of the religious stuff kinda bugged me, but I don't really care to be fair. the book is quite easy to read I don't know why people are Complaining. it was a fun and hopefully will continue to be a fun read.
i stoped at around chap 20. not that its bad but i just felt lost with all the info thrown around. the story is really good and a must read and there is a lot of in depth info on magic that i find interesting and pretty cool.tho i would recomend author to put like a word explination to terms and names that some people might not know, understand or ponounce cus there were a few terms i did not understand and didn't fell like looking up(my problem, not yours).
i dont agree with the negative reviews, it is a good story, what more can i say. so troll dont give negative review, it is worth the read
I love this its very good it dosent feel like a harry potter fic so if u want some harry potter stuff thats related to plot so its not that but thats why it so good its not like everyother HP ff thats why i like it so much and it very high quality most stuff do make sense in the story and the translations good quality in my opinion tho its not my native so i cant say anything for the native speakers but at least for me who dosent speak it nativly find very few mistakes most are just wrongly translated and thos arent that bad like i have read much worse so i dont car my own englhis aint that good neihter is my own launage so like lol but would definetly recomend to read for all who migth like a harry pitter fic thats more on au but still has the core of harry potter better than most harry potter fics that have marvel/mcu most of the are kinda bad cus i feel like hp magic dosent go that well with mcu tho its bit difrent if the fic is a template fic or gacha sytem vut in the end lool AUHTOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 💀
I like the setting of the story and the update speed is also good (at ch 31)Though there are some obvious written issues and a lot of exposition(like more than the actual dialogues) I hope the story gets completed if nothing else. don't leave the story hanging and improvement is much appreciated.
This is one of the more in-depth world building works I have read, it develops multiply factions instead of ’enemy faction crush’ good work mate keep going plz
I really enjoy this but the writing and dialogue structure is a chore to read and comprehend. I struggle to see where the dialogue starts and ends, it's really the only bad thing I can say about the book, besides the fact the MC is supposed to be the first Archmage in centuries and keeps meeting people more powerful than him.
Hello everyone, as for the translation, I want to say that it is quite normal, it can be worse. As for the novel itself, if someone expects to see here a snake that devours everything it sees, this is not the case here, and also gg is rather boring and uninteresting, I know for myself, I read the original about half a year ago or so. So I do not advise fans of villains and interesting characters to read, forget quickly, and after reading there will be a lump of disappointment from the fact that you have spent your time on this at all.
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A masterpiece to me, how others felt, who cares. The way a lot of different topics are blend together leaves a nice taste
Give it three chapters, if you enjoy a fresh take on HP you will not regret it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]