I will be doing a major rewrite on this book the following week.
I will try to rewrite atleast one chapter daily.
The perks of rewrite: longer chapters, better world building and character development.
Cons: It will take atleast a month to finally make new chapters.
The rewritten chapters will be notified in the titles of the chapters so you can know if the chapter is old or new.
Nothing extra will be added though I will just write some extra reactions and make it a little slow paced.
Until then,
Willy Wonka