Overall the concept is good but no emotion or comedy and liie more character development needed
4 months ago
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BeyondTheLaw
I like the idea behind the story. But the author is really tarnishing his own work with the grammar faults found in the chapters. Author, if you see this, you can use chat gpt to ask for some guidance before uploading a chapter. It'll be able to help you, at least for the mistakes you're making.
the novel is really good . I'll recommend u to read it if you want to see a clan that build from the ground to supreme in the world
no hate it my opinion but i think this is lacking emotion not my cup of tea
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Overall the concept is good but no emotion or comedy and liie more character development needed
I like the idea behind the story. But the author is really tarnishing his own work with the grammar faults found in the chapters. Author, if you see this, you can use chat gpt to ask for some guidance before uploading a chapter. It'll be able to help you, at least for the mistakes you're making.