The new System

The new System

Fantasy3 Chapters483.1K Views
Author: OliverSmith_
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Jay is a new college student, 19 years old, travel to Australia to visit his step mom Liz's twin sis, aunt Bec in his gap year, died in air plane crash. He went to the hell. A demon succubus Lilith took his soul and discovered all his evil thoughts, which is why he is in hell.

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OliverSmith_
OliverSmith_

Hi All, I am your author here. This is a book for anyone older than 18 years old. If you like the stoies about some forbidden desires, please go ahead. This book is just for some part of readers, not suitable for all users. Regards, Your Author.

2 years ago
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Blackwizard
Blackwizard

I can't say much but the story is intriguing, and the writing quality is promising. I could see a good potential for the MC so I'll wait for what the story goes

2 years ago
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Abyss_Edge
Abyss_Edge

Come one come all!... For those 18 and above anyways.... Those that likes to think they are.. Shoo shoo... 😜😜😜

2 years ago
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Priscilla_Singlet
Priscilla_Singlet

One of the greatest books one can find out there about some forbidden fantasies ...if you looking for something good ...this is definitely the book to read ..thank you for making the book so smoothly beautiful author

2 years ago
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Ramon69
Ramon69

Well, I am not going to write something that might project me as a pervert but i just love the novel.The struggle that MC and his mother is going through in their newfound relationship complexity is really great, not just straight up f******g as that would be boring.I am really looking forward to how he handles his future problems with the situation he is put in.Oh and grammer is great, no glaring mistakes, good update frequency.Great novel, give it a read.Since it's more than just a normal smit novel

2 years ago
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UniqueKarma
UniqueKarma

A good book to read, i really love the story line

2 years ago
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Tarhuala
Tarhuala

Wow, this story knows how to grab its readers! I was totally blown away each time I scrolled to the next chapter. I've already binged all the available chapters, and I'm definitely coming back for more.

2 years ago
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Runningdad1
Runningdad1

nice start .I believe this is going to be a great story. please need more

2 years ago
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B_l_a_n_k_2167
B_l_a_n_k_2167

After being taken by a demon succubus named Lilith, he is given magical powers and sent back in time one year with a grim ultimatum: he must manipulate and encourage unhappy wives to cheat on their husbands, or he will face certain death exactly one year later. That is a great start keep up the good work!

2 years ago
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AkitoTakahashi
AkitoTakahashi

Oh my gosh! Haha. Okay. Please, please be careful when reading this. I'm not into harems or romance genres such as these, but that doesn't mean I don't overlook what each author tries to convey in their writing. Oliver, mate, we really gotta talk about your mindset! As for Jay? We're gonna have to lynch him or something. Love it when main characters are written well enough to give readers those sort of thoughts.

2 years ago
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shyfix291
shyfix291

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2 years ago
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Carteluo
Carteluo

Good writing, not a lot of redundant information, the progression is natural, not rushed in the plot. My only complaints is that it goes too direct, Lilith proposes something very open-ended and expands the plot to a lot of variety. But her direct focus on her mother, without mulling over possibilities other than her mother, takes a bit out of the immersion. For the author, you may not want to focus on other women for now, but you have to leave certain groundwork, to anticipate and expand the plot, a couple of lines is enough. So far of this review I'm going for chapter 21 moment I like it and I have FAITH in it.

2 years ago
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Atta_02
Atta_02

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2 years ago
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MattMagma
MattMagma

Very good adult novel for sure! The story is smooth, and steady. Nothing too revealing yet. I want more.

2 years ago
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Mountain_Yogi
Mountain_Yogi

Interesting story. The MC died virgin and have been given a second chance. The story so far have explained the background and part of the system. We see the MC taking care of his mother and building his relationship into forbidden desire.

2 years ago
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