Fearless hearts
Author: Zendaya_nights
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The devil stared at the painting of his only daughter and smiled..
"It's only a matter of time Darlene, you'll either come back to me or I'll take you back by force"
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Is English not your first language? If it isn't then, good work! While the grammar structure isn't the best, such as missing full stops (punctuation marks) at like the end of a character's dialogue, other than that, I think the story has potential. The story has me, a casual reader, interested so good job on that. I will be sticking around, maybe editing my review here and there, so yeah. Keep up the good work.