A penny for your thought?

I really did not like my first creations. So I edited them.

If you had read them before the edit, you re-read it, beacuse i think it changed some of the flow. and made it a little bit more, introductory hehe.

Thank You If You do Read!!!

You can also, comment some criticism, I could handle a little punch. LOL

Thank YOUUUUUUU<3<3<3