Luminous Chronicles: Shadows of the Dual
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synopsis:
In the dazzling city of Luminaire, teeming with technological marvels and secrets, young Eiden's life takes a fateful turn when his scientist parents embark on a clandestine mission. Their plane, meant for a covert operation, is hijacked, leaving Eiden vowing revenge as he witnesses their tragic fate on television.
Drowning in grief, Eiden transforms himself into an agile and relentless vigilante through intensive training. He masters martial arts, parkour, and defies gravity, becoming a symbol of hope in the city's shadows. He emerges as the Luminous, ready to shine through the night and seek justice.
As Luminaire's vibrant world fuses with Eiden's personal odyssey, the narrative sets the stage for a tale of intrigue and determination in a city at the brink of darkness.
Amazing storyworld building to character building is top notch
"In writing, it's very neat, the way you create the beginning or markers of the seriousness of the story is very organized. Starting from how Eiden achieves his main goal. I particularly like the main character who is calm and not reckless in sharing events and time. Maybe the shortcoming is in the swift day transitions in each chapter; try to make them a bit longer on those days."