Destiny Divine: The Divine Threads
Through the lenses of Konquerors, a place where hidden realities are twisting destinies, Timothy a 15 yr old and dreamy, discovers that what seems to be ordinary life is a fabric of lies. The filmy veil of his ordinary family-life is torn up at that point, and he finds himself in the brink of a world on the verge of war. Timothy's world is upturned with the unveiling of The Forsaken Son's Prophecy and he is forced to compensate for an existence totally different from the one he had ever known. In the subterfuge provided by the mysterious imprints of fate, he has to find support amidst fragile alliances and to undo age-old mysteries, which he must do with the demons of chaos always on his heels. Be a part of Timothy on a wayward path to find what he is looking for and the meaning of his life all the time filling him with impending fate with each step he takes.
I like the overall creativity when it comes to the naming of the characters and the slow but steady world building. Over all it’s pretty good. I’m also writing something similar to your work feel free to check it out!
the story started off a bit slow but as I read on the author improved 🤩 Jake is my favorite ❤️ I believe the author can improve
This story is unique and captivating from the very first chapter. I'm eager to find out if the prophecy of the elder has something to do with the ML's gift. Kudos to the author.
i really loved reading it it's soo exciting soo I'll be just finishing the other chapters..📚🥰
the plot is so intriguing that it keep me up to read it even more.... It was fantastic!
I love how the story started along with how well the character were developed. But among all, the plot in the novel is very intriguing along with it's development. I highly recommend this novel if you are in need of an enticing novel
What a fun and refreshing storyline! I love the world that you have built and your writing is very good! Keep up the good work!
loved the story dude. the feeling that this story is something so big is just a yes from me, and your writing is pretty good I loved it keep going my man!
wow interesting am already hooked on this book big ups to the author
I love a good story about a world different from reality, love cliff hangers and this story gives me both. #loving it
Good story with good wording and setting .I love it how it starts from a crisis discussion. Easy to understand and intriguing . The story unfolds smoothly .
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Not bad, bruh your novel ain't half bad, plus you named your mc after yourself like I did, RESPECT. Hope your book keeps on improving, congrats in advance.
I will call the master piece an amazing plot-filled story but has a lot of grammatical errors, and if corrected, will be better. Good luck Author
I gave your first few chapters a read, and I genuinely want to tell you, without any offense but a mere suggestion as a fellow writer, consider editing your work. You can use Grammarly to check your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Please continue striving to be a better writer.