The Tree of Sarasin: The Cost of Desires

The Tree of Sarasin: The Cost of Desires

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Author: Lemonsoda82
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The Duke's eccentric wife vanished without trace, and the most unsettling part is that no one seems to remember her. With King Claudius demanding Philippe to marry his niece, Lady Camille of Belmont. He embarks on a quest to uncover the truth and reclaim his freedom.

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JuicyGrape
JuicyGrape

Okay so, I would like to bring to your attention the Chapters being scrambled😕–might want to fix that- and also your grammar is great! not many errors as long as someone is not a stickler with grammar, but I do want to say that without any Prologue or Synopsis, your chapter one can come out to be a little too strong and overwhelming with all the sudden scenes, names, worldbuilding (background context of events)... overall it seems like it has a lot of potential🥰

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