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Its your typical webnovel Fanfic and Mc, he can kill without consequence because the System allows it. Everything goes the way the MC wants it without any type retaliation in any form anyway. But he still wants to have the canon so he plays the edgy teen and refuses to help tony directly. The Character interaction is more or less none existent its just him showing a little bit of power some sentences that are in terms of writing on the level of a 12 year old Batman fan. His system, isn't really used like in 30 Chapter he only used it 2 time such make no sense at all.

The more I read, the more ridiculous it becomes. First, he went to save Tony, as if it was his duty. Then he unmasked himself, giving unreasonable excuses like wanting to save Yinsen from his death. (I guessed he might want to make friends and secure backup from Tony)... but how wrong I was Second, he told Tony about all his tech, including the Vanguard Titan, and even let him UPGRADE it????? Bro, why would you do that? And on top of that, everything went way too smoothly. Tony believed him, Yinsen believed him, the military had zero clue, and the U.S never found out either. Just like that, without any explanation, without any consequences. Third, his years of experience in warfare completely vanished. He keeps mentioning how he learned about literally everything from the game world, but his actions show none of that. But I still believe AUTHOR. I'm pretty sure the story will get better after hundreds of chapters or so.

Mc gets op fast ( not Superman op but still op ), I think Author could have slow down a little bit, also MC system should have changed From giving evaluation to just results like pass or fail. Rather then giving MC items or powers, system could have worked as training and knowledge base for mc. MC could have gone from tech to Magic tech and slowly gotten OP. But still it's a good relaxing Fanfic, Not MC getting too out of hand ( like chinese MC ), Mc does have his time when he do think stupid or He just boring. MC don't have much life outside the game world, Yes he does spend time with his family but those are like one world talk and that's all you will read Most of time, As For Friends lets just not talking they are just for show, His friendship with Tony is better than others but still the same MC being Shut most of the time. Anyway, it's good to someone people taste. so give it a try and make you own choice

The forced plot after the 70s of the chapter, where the author forced to force the protagonist to lose Mephisto and become an ancient student

me going into gow 3 and 4 cause I platted them💀

this is one of the best Marvel fanfic out here I don't know why some people are criticizing it I have seen worse fics getting better comments but for good stories and novels people badmouth them well whatever according to me it is a good one with no forced plot and fast-paced no unnecessary drama anything I recommend to read this anyway thanks for this author

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Well a good read for a MCU fan but the MC is just a little less smart and not paranoid and the reward the MC get's were random even after he spend thousands of years in the game and there has to be atleast something like blank armour, weapon, something like which is totally blank and as the MC get's new things of same kind he can feed it to the blank armour and tada he got a suit with mix of everyother suit he can get like titanfall robo and it's suit javelin and Tony suits not we got a suit that is magical technological and scientifical like titan and thrustes of a rocket arc reactor powers

I enjoy the story though I do wonder what the character love life will be like since with his personality I'm pretty sure only a girl from one of the games will be able to get him but other than that pretty cool can't wait to see more

An entertaining and interesting story to read! Keep it up and hope this book reaches it's completion. 🙏

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Very good story so far I’ve read it twice on my tablet and for those who say bad things like that he gets op fast or so on are just wrong after all as soon as he got heimdall and Atreus templates he got beat badly by Mephisto and almost died and now he has to fight deviants and may have to fight celestials and maybe worse in the future and you have to remember he is in marvel there are always someone stronger you will probably have to face so great story so far and please keep up the good work and please above all finish the story I truly hate good stories going unfinished which happens a lot

A pretty good fanfic, unlike other fanfics that strictly try to follow the canon plot like it's not innovative yet find a good amount of stability to justify the plot progression. The characters are realistic and I would say it's one of the good fanfics. Great job author.

I'm really enjoying this one a lot I don't care about the criticism of others as this story has the games in it I know and the way the system works is very enjoyable I like how he interacts with Tony and the Gang