In the apocalypse, Alan lost everything. He sat at a wooden table, holding a gun, ready to end it all after being bitten by a zombie. But when he pulled the trigger, everything went black—and then he woke up. Ten years in the past.
Now, Alan has a second chance. A chance to save the people he loves, to stop the world from falling apart, and to protect his little sister, Alice. But can he do it? Can he fight against the future he remembers and the mistakes he made?
The clock is ticking, and danger is everywhere. 10 Years of Redemption is Alan’s story of survival, hope, and the fight to rewrite the future. Will he succeed, or will history repeat itself? Read to find out.
LSS: this is a typical zombie 'apocalypse' with the single spin/gimmick of a retry mechanic (à la Re:Zero, Tokyo Revengers). English grammar is pretty serviceable in the beggining, but deteriorates in the middle, and improves a bit near the end. Characterization is flat, as more development was needed (plus char bios don't match with the actual story). Too reliant on 'screenplaying' for transitions, rather than using subtle cues in the text. Even factoring in my not being big on the genre, there is nothing particularly intriguing about the story - and the fact it's left unfinished makes it less of a draw to check out.
Personally I really like this story just there is a few grammatical errors but I really like the story and I think you should continue so I give it a 4.8