Good development, with good potential.a novel with some fresh and innovative ideas.The question is, is the protagonist still a villain or is he now a hero?I would prefer him to take the villain's path, but not get lost in it and become a psychopath.
a year ago
6
tjjfche
The writing quality is decent it can use bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear.The story has a fast development but it's clear enough you don't get lost.The mc is generic lone wolf like most cultivation novels.As for the world there is lot to be filled in, but the description is god enough that you can understand what is going on.Overall a decent book just need more flare.
a year ago
5
Beyond_the_wall
The story is awesome !! The writing quality is great too. 👍😀
9 months ago
2
GoddessKM
This novel is a breath of fresh air for me from always reading generic romances. I like the story's pacing and the introductory chapter is already engaging enough to get me so reeled. Really appreciate this story, and I hope to read more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
a year ago
2
Bago_Bago_5587
wow nice book good job from author , I'm waiting for more chapters♥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
a year ago
2
Notorious_911
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9 months ago
1
VertiKalEl
I won't lie here. Only read up to chapter three and I would point out that it is a great start in terms of storyline but the writing style seems inhuman - almost like AI. I would like to give the author the benefit of the doubt and assume that he wrote it himself before asking AI to rewrite with perfect grammar or else... All that aside, very good start. A good storyline I see here. Give it a try. If you don't find slightly inhuman perfection jarring like I do then this would be a good fit for you. I also like the fact that MC is an ordinary guy before transmigrated, a breath of fresh air to see an old man mc
9 months ago
1
Iago_Cech
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a year ago
1
Dark_Scholars
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a year ago
1
Bad_Bishop
in simple terms, great book.the character progression keeps on guessing and world building is just amazing.Nice one author
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Good development, with good potential.a novel with some fresh and innovative ideas.The question is, is the protagonist still a villain or is he now a hero?I would prefer him to take the villain's path, but not get lost in it and become a psychopath.
The writing quality is decent it can use bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear.The story has a fast development but it's clear enough you don't get lost.The mc is generic lone wolf like most cultivation novels.As for the world there is lot to be filled in, but the description is god enough that you can understand what is going on.Overall a decent book just need more flare.
The story is awesome !! The writing quality is great too. 👍😀
This novel is a breath of fresh air for me from always reading generic romances. I like the story's pacing and the introductory chapter is already engaging enough to get me so reeled. Really appreciate this story, and I hope to read more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
wow nice book good job from author , I'm waiting for more chapters♥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I won't lie here. Only read up to chapter three and I would point out that it is a great start in terms of storyline but the writing style seems inhuman - almost like AI. I would like to give the author the benefit of the doubt and assume that he wrote it himself before asking AI to rewrite with perfect grammar or else... All that aside, very good start. A good storyline I see here. Give it a try. If you don't find slightly inhuman perfection jarring like I do then this would be a good fit for you. I also like the fact that MC is an ordinary guy before transmigrated, a breath of fresh air to see an old man mc
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in simple terms, great book.the character progression keeps on guessing and world building is just amazing.Nice one author
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