Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

You have written Harem(Probably), but I hope NoHarem will make the decision.Just Raiden...................................................................happy new year

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it was going good but Author a massive jaime fan bro but its not needed to keep him alive and spare him it was good for awhile untill then

Amazing book but chapter 12-13 are completely pointless

Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem………………………………………………………

Great novel, with nothing but excellent dialogue that captivates and draws you into the world, unfortunately all this was ruined personally by some terrible choices. The first of which is the anti climactic death of his first love, which mind you is an OC. Most won’t like this, personally I didn’t either not because of them being OC but due to the lack of character development, an OC Whose only interiaction occurs with our Mc four times, before our emotionally needy Mc falls head over heal for her. Second and the worst yet is the sparing of Jamie Lannister, without giving into spoilers let’s just say he killed someone close very close to the mc in blood, but instead of killing him the mc spares him and sends him to the wall. I still cannot except how Stannis a stickler for rules was able to except this, it’s completely illogical and breaks all the narrative. But other than these it’s a great novel, with stable updates, and no gramatical errors, fantastic characters and emotionaly captivating dialogue, and just a fun read all around the first eighteen chapters are a just a blast. So if you have a spare time or bored give it a read it’s probably one of the best game of thrones fanfiction on WEBNOVEL at the moment. I’ll update this review in the future when the book is finished.

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gave this another shot, everything is above average. I just don't like the MC having no free will, every time he showed feelings, Raiden would gaslight him, or the higher entity would give him conditions that he must follow. Don't get me wrong, MC's real feelings are annoying AF and I agree to most of their gaslighting, but that real personality kept coming out and it just ruin any sense of payoff he got from all that hard work.

I think it's an alright story. I have conflicts with how he tackles his emotions and how he develops his strength. If I were just a regular kid living in the middle ages I would have a little more understanding of some of the decisions but as a grown adult mind in a child's body, he does make some childish decisions. I am somewhat of a genshin geek and would say that although Raiden's cold robotic personality is accurate she is nerfed compared to the actual genshin world.

Enjoyable story that keeps you engaged. Some parts there is room for annoyance, but you can always expect that. I couldn’t ask for much more.

One of the best fanfics on GOT I've ever read, deserves more views and stones Great story development, especially with it distancing it self from canon. Great writing quality alongside with character progression....................XD

There are spoilers. (I'm translating with Google Translate and I don't intend to correct the obvious mistakes in the translation, I'm tired.) I finished episode 101 in 2-3 days. People are right in the comments about the death of MC's first love, favoritism towards Jaimi, because similar things are not done to MC's other enemies/opponents, somehow his opponents can't pull themselves together. My complaint is the presence and absence of a system. We see MC's developments in the story and after ten episodes, a number screen is added and those numbers mean nothing to you, you've already seen the development and since you don't remember the previous number, you can't even be sure if it's increased. The second thing I don't like is the romance. He stays engaged to Arya and doesn't exclude the girl fan group around him, if there's going to be a harem, it could happen and we would have gotten rid of all this girl fan group conflict, but still MC is driving them around like a tail because he wants to be 'friends' instead of kicking them out. If there will be a harem, the harem members are: Daenerys, Margaery, Arya, Sansa, the desert b*tch whose name I will not write and Raiden Shogun. Raiden Shogun did nothing useful until the 70th episode of the story except for giving MC magic power, then he started to train her a little. After the grand final battle of the story, MC's ultimate wife and partner is introduced as Raiden Shogun, it is given the impression that they will go to the multiverse together, but I do not think this story will be completed. The first reason for this is that, like most writers, this writer has a habit of leaving his plots half-done, so it may never be completed or only the Lich King is defeated and Raiden Shogun regains his body and the story ends, the multiverse journey with Raiden Shogun will never start as it was launched. The second reason is the monotony that started with the 85th episode and continued until the 101st episode, the characters were scattered to very different places and although there were short developments between the scenes, no conclusion was obtained, the process in the 85th episode is the same in the 101st episode. Even 2-3 characters are in worse condition, they tried to do the same thing for 30-40 episodes and still couldn't get results. I got bored of the story too much to tell the aspects of it that I liked, but let me remind you that I read 101 episodes in 2-3 days, so the story has many good aspects.

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

I enjoy this fanfic quite a lot, its interesting enough for me, and it always makes me want to read more. I just hoped the releases would be more frequent, but each author has their own lives, and so I would not fault the author that much. Either way, its a story I would reccomend.