From Fatty to the Supreme Demon Lord
What do you do when you die and wake up in the body of a powerful entity?
Leo was chosen by the Demon Lord and killed for that. He awoke in his new slim and attractive body, an opposite image to what he looked like before dying.
He thought the new world would now be his to take, but was baffled when he learned that all the power his predecessor had was locked behind his life's sigils.
Such a revelation could have broken anyone, but he's determined to gain power to unlock more power. He's determined to have this new world know him for what he can achieve, and he won't tolerate any humiliation as in his past life.
But, the gods are waiting for him.
Waiting to...end him.
What to expect;
*Progression
*A rude system/guide/pet
*A not-so-righteous MC (not a villain)
*Murder
*Love(slow burn)
*smut
The author has good grammar and is good at describing what's happening, you can see how the mc is just a normal guy and makes mistakes that anyone would still slowly he improves, the world background is slowly getting unraveled as the story continues so I can't say anything other than the author is doing a good job
I won't give myself a 5 cause there might be some minor mistakes. But yah, I do have confidence in my work. I believe I'll find the right audience that will enjoy my novels and I'll keep them entertained. I'm open to criticism but don't leave any insults. Writers grow from the audience's feedback.