What is even harder than surpassing the heavens and reaching the source of the dao? Guiding your disciples to do it. Being a Teacher is truly the most burdensome of jobs. Read the not so epic tale of the most untalented teacher of all realms.
Since I know where you live, the score you truly deserve is a 5. Even though you keep me hostage in your closet, this story still deserves this high rating. Anyhow, congratulations on your first publication and hopefully you free me from this awful place. Good luck!
2 years ago
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DaoistxyWPzL
Good start to the story, a creative way of setting up what's coming. The concept in chapter 0 was pretty good, but I couldn't help but notice the use of 'big' words that might affect immersion, at least for me. Chapter 1 has a slow start, expected to set the environment and backstory of the character. However, the event that follows up reveals a rather unique plot twist that I somehow wasn't expecting. I really hope to see how this work turns out, and good luck!
2 years ago
2
Masked_Clown
Author here. I bestow upon my creation a rating of 5 stars. I myself am trying my best to cultivate stars. These 5 will be the beginning. Let's see how many more I can get.
Since I know where you live, the score you truly deserve is a 5. Even though you keep me hostage in your closet, this story still deserves this high rating. Anyhow, congratulations on your first publication and hopefully you free me from this awful place. Good luck!
Good start to the story, a creative way of setting up what's coming. The concept in chapter 0 was pretty good, but I couldn't help but notice the use of 'big' words that might affect immersion, at least for me. Chapter 1 has a slow start, expected to set the environment and backstory of the character. However, the event that follows up reveals a rather unique plot twist that I somehow wasn't expecting. I really hope to see how this work turns out, and good luck!
Author here. I bestow upon my creation a rating of 5 stars. I myself am trying my best to cultivate stars. These 5 will be the beginning. Let's see how many more I can get.