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Invaded by an alien species known as the Shataki, Blue Earth was thrown into war as they fought for their survival against the invaders.

Against the Shataki, their groundbreaking weapons were useless, and they were on the brink of extinction. But then, they discovered a connection to a mysterious world called the Ancient Realm.

By passing the trials of the Ancient Realm, humans from Blue Earth could begin their journey as cultivators and enhance their strength.

With their newfound power, humans were able to push the Shataki back, but the battle was not as simple as they thought.

It was then they learned their enemies were not bent on destroying their world but were searching for something.

What was it? No one knew.

But then, in a small city, a boy was betrayed by his girlfriend and was killed, allowing a new soul to enter his body.

The arrival of this new soul would change the fate of both Blue Earth and the Ancient Realm as many secrets began to unravel.  


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[Ding!] 

[You've awakened the Lifespan System!]

[Host, to reach your full potential, accumulate more lifespan.]

[Warning:  Insufficient lifespan detected. Host will die in 1 hour.]

I Have A Lifespan System

Here's the corrected version of the story:

Caleb Li looked at the plain white room without any change in his expression.

At the center of the room was a medium-sized white crystal levitating in the air.

Standing beside him was the female examiner with a device in her hand.

"Student Li, please go and touch the crystal," she instructed.

Caleb Li did not think twice and walked toward the crystal, placing his hand on it. Immediately, a stream of strange energy tried to invade his body. Noticing this, the corner of his lips curled upward a bit, and he let the energy pass through his meridians.

Though he allowed the energy to invade his body, he still restricted some areas, hiding his real strength.

Shortly, the energy returned to the crystal, and a sound echoed in the room.

"Student Li, you can return," the examiner said.

"Yes," she responded, and a holo screen appeared before Caleb Li.

The Momentum - Part 1