Let me start off by saying that I love the title to this story!
Overall, I find it incredibly well-written with vivid, yet bleak, descriptions and solid use of metaphor. There is not too much information given, which keeps you invested (Instead of info-dumping). And despite the whole apocalypse setting, the story is pretty self-contained. Well done!
Let me start off by saying that I love the title to this story! Overall, I find it incredibly well-written with vivid, yet bleak, descriptions and solid use of metaphor. There is not too much information given, which keeps you invested (Instead of info-dumping). And despite the whole apocalypse setting, the story is pretty self-contained. Well done!