MHA: LAW OF MOTION

the story still too early to just review it but decided to do so anyways.. -so starting up we have writing quality where the slight problem i have with this book comes from, not in the sense of unreadable grammar or whatnot rather the problem comes from the transitioning of scenes and POV's that it sometimes is jarring and I'm hoping gets fixed soon. -now story development is alright except for my personal bias against the MC's elder brother with his "yandare-ish" tendencies which isn't really as bad as it sounds just that i tend to personally dislike these traits in characters (boo me all you want, and yes that include tsunderes and the others). all in all the story's been good so far give it a shot and hopefully the writer gets better and delivers a masterpiece and it doesn't end up as another edgy self indulgent MHA fic we are used (or I'm used to on this platform ) so have fun...

I really don’t know why every fanfic starts by showing me an interesting part of the story before the beginning. Like it’s telling me it gets interesting later so bare with me rehash the childhood and school life in way to much detail. Then most of em get dropped anyway and the meat one is childhood all over again. Then people stop reading am shit gets dropped. The last part ain’t about this one specifically but the first part was

I really love this story thank you for the development and I wait the future of that UA 🎉 I hope you never abandoned this story in the future

Shameless five star review from the author here. Normally I should have done this from the start of the fic. AT first i had some doubts if I could actually write, you know find the motivation to pick up my keyboard and bring the story to a conclusion. Turns out I canxD. So the basic idea for the story is someone getting reincarnated in MHA with the speed force as a quirk. We're done with the first volume that is admittedly slow but I needed it for foreshadowing and to create the prototype of the character and his future motivations. Feel free to use this review page to ask any questions you have about the fic.

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I like it! kinda reminds me of hit from Dbs!

Honestly, I don’t recommend at all. It has been 50 chapters with pacing it is horrible. There hasn’t been any significant event in 50 chapters. Which means nothing happens since the start of the fic.

The story has been interesting so far. It's undeniably slow but it seems like the author wants to upload this for a omg time. Still it's an interesting read. Also how fast is Rio?