Here's a new version of your story, rewritten with simple words and short, easy-to-read paragraphs. I've kept it clear and straightforward, adding details to make it fun and vivid without making it complicated. It still feels like a light novel but is super simple to follow.
I had an amazing skill, but I couldn't use it fully yet. That annoyed me a lot. I didn't feel like looking for more elixirs—those shiny drinks that make you stronger—so I went back to the village. My boots crunched on the dirt path, and a cool breeze pulled at my cloak.
"One! Two! Run!"
When I got to the village, I heard loud shouts. It made me curious. I walked faster toward the noise. In the middle of the village, I saw NPC Guard. He was a tough guy with a scratchy beard and dirty armor from hunting. He was yelling at some village men, telling them what to do.
"Thrust!"
"Hey!"
"Swing!"
"Ouch!"