CFO Element: Monarch of the Night
Every Man, Woman, Child, Living organism that roam the plains of Hilderia has heard of the legend of the Majestic being that hunts the night.
Uleen Virgo the mysterious King of the night, now forced to live as the ultimate predator, seeks for nothing but to break Itself from the curse that afflicted it and took away its freedom.
Aaliyah Walters, the lowest of all the humans, suffering the most amongst all of the humans. Even in the time of prosperity for humans she was bound by a contract to serve the higher ups as a lowly slave.
She was later accused of a crime by the king she loved and admired so much, fearing for her life; she flees into the comfort of the King of the night Uleen Virgo.
Uleen Virgo then makes it a priority to become the god of Hildera and unite all the races under one rule to protect them all from the incoming attack.
A being after the rumor and curses layed on it by all, decided to sacrifice Itself to save all it swore to protect.
Interesting plot = Yes Writing Quality = Out of this world World Building/Background = Phenomenal If you do not believe me, check out the novel yourself! Regrettably, the only downside is that the novel has just started. Author, write more chapters!
I like your writing quality and your use of adjectives to describe characters, I also like how you're doing 10 chapters a week which is more than I've done so far, my goal is to be able to average similar numbers. The story is developing very nicely so far, slow down the world-building. I need a lot more details on character backgrounds and everything else. overall your book is good but its lacking in certain things that I know you can change and improve I hope you get more views and readers.
I like your diversity I like your dragon and I like the humanity race in the book it is interesting and I would recommend
I am yet to see full dialoguing and interacting. I like your world building and different lores, character design, keep up the good work with your updates. Proofread incase of grammatical errors I like how you refer to the King of the night as “It”. Hilderia is a beautiful world with twist and turns but before you expand the world more make a chapter explaining more on the humans and thier guilding system, for me it is the best part of the book. i will continue to follow your work. Just remember me when your novel blows up. So for now you get a 5 star for me ;)
I like this it has elements of the kind of book I would like to read keep up the good work. But what's going on with your update? You haven't said anything in a while?
This book is really good i like the plot and the way it is organized and the base of it and the power system and the different faces in it and the dynamic of the humans in different ways
\what a beautiful story, but i'm so far behind i would like to catch up and see how the story progresses. I am in chapter 3 and i love the way you craft your lore's keep it up Francis!!!