Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one

overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck

The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.

You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind

Well done to you![img=recommend][img=recommend]

love your story’s love how this has begun and how it’s moving

I'm 200 chapters in and I really like the way story is going. Like how it is more on a realistic side and especially MC's cleverness and personality. I hope I will see some kingdom building in the chapters ahead not just waging wars. I also hope you can post a better map than that sorry exuse of a map lol as it gets confusing sometimes.

the novel is very good, here are some flags author, that I see, when you describe it...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......

It was good at first and had good potential but in the end. It turns nothing more than cliché story with MC suddenly becoming this over the top confident and arrogant MC with "I don't give a shit about other" attitude. He also doesn't care the problems his friends points out just smiles being nonchalant about it. MC attitude doesn't feels very unearned and very obnoxious at this point. MC acting like he max out his character stats and just visiting the beginner town to do some quest there for the sake of nostalgia.

If you are a kid then this is not for you. A very good novel with expressive writing. A quality work 👏👏👏 unlike most novels found here.

you looking for a great story and world building this is the best in its genre.Only issue is the pov switch besides the main cast of Alpheo and his comrades,enemies and allies.The rest feel sometimes like filler.More focus on Alpheo building and growing his princedom would be better.

This story is simply amazing. Some parts are a little stretched out, but it is still a masterpiece.

Why can’t the author just stick to one POV? Like, damn. I gave up.

love the elites units in the novel and the impact they have in wars which is very realistic