Bound in chains yet yearning for freedom, Alpheo, a modern historian, finds himself enslaved in a land on the brink of chaos.
As the empire of Rolmia plunges into civil war following the death of the emperor , his three ambitious sons vie for the throne. In the midst of this turmoil, Alpheo finds the chance to break his chain and escape, leading his companions into the ashes of war, trying to thrive in it, selling their swords to the highest bidder .
But beyond the borders of Rolmia, hungry eyes watch as the empire's grip loosens. The Sultanate of Azania, ever the opportunist, sees a chance to expand its domain and influence , while to the south, neighboring principalities breathe a sigh of relief as the once-dominant giant stumbles and falters.
In the sea, the confederation of the Free Isle finds their chance to restore their old maritime power , denied to them by an empire that is now crumbling beneath itself , lacking the strenght to stop them.
In this crucible of conflict, where dynasties crumble and empires fall, Alpheo find his call and the chance to forge his own destiny amidst the ashes of empires.
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Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one
overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck
You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind
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The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.
love your story’s love how this has begun and how it’s moving
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If you are a kid then this is not for you. A very good novel with expressive writing. A quality work 👏👏👏 unlike most novels found here.
It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------
fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.
Really Great Nobel More Charters please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Really good start!!! Let’s see what happens next. Author please don’t drop it
Review written by the translator, I'm not fluent in English. I'm on chapter 101 and, so far, the story in general is GOOD and well written, apart from some personal criticisms, the only problem I sometimes see is the lack of fluidity in the story, one moment the chapter is about Alpheo and the next we are in the land of the North with the First Prince. Other than that, the story and especially Alpheo is being very well developed. The world hasn't exactly been underdeveloped so far, but I think the author will address that in the future. 5 stars. Keep up the great work and good luck with the history, author!
It was good at first and had good potential but in the end. It turns nothing more than cliché story with MC suddenly becoming this over the top confident and arrogant MC with "I don't give a shit about other" attitude. He also doesn't care the problems his friends points out just smiles being nonchalant about it. MC attitude doesn't feels very unearned and very obnoxious at this point. MC acting like he max out his character stats and just visiting the beginner town to do some quest there for the sake of nostalgia.
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