It's been literally one day, and I have to drop this. I keep overthinking everything now and I'm a perfectionist, so I'm probably going to redo the original Spirit Eater novel I attempted before to make it less chaotic. Sorry for anyone that wasted their time reading this, I hate my perfectionist nature and I can't handle it.
I hope you come back someday for my redo of Spirit Eater that *isnt* a fanfiction of Dragon Age... sorry.