Lin Quan traveled to the year 2012 and became the adopted son of Pep Guardiola. He originally played as a midfielder, but unexpectedly gained Messi's Prime attributes from him due to the sudden awakening of the "King of Football" system.
That year, the incomparable duo reached its peak. Messi scored 91 goals, while Cristiano Ronaldo scored 63, dominating the entire world of football, leaving no room for a third contender.
However, from that year on, the rivalry between the incomparable duo transformed into a three-player confrontation.
Guardiola: There are rumors suggesting that I relied on Lin Quan to win so many championships. Let me clarify, this is not true.
Mourinho: If Guardiola didn't have Lin, his honors would never surpass mine!
Messi: People say that Lin Quan plays like me, but I think that's not entirely accurate because Lin is even more versatile than me.
Cristiano Ronaldo: I thought my only rival was Messi, but another Lin Quan unexpectedly emerged.
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Chapters on my Patreon Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi in his Prime (up to chapter 85)
I cannot be a Martial Ancestor, then I will be Emperor Yan. (up to chapter 60)
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Does this novel include Chinese themes like "your Courting death" or like those face slapping type???? if so then I don't want to read it....
Everything is good but why do commentators have Chinese name?
More romance and more about the system.. But definitely more romantic scenes with more details.
My problem with this novel is that it keeps changing the players names(e.g. Reus was Royce for a chapter, De Bruyne has a different name every chapter,Lahm is Ram at some point). Other than that it's a good sports novel
"More chapters, teacher, it's great! There aren't many soccer novels on web novels, so I'd like more novels like this!!!!"[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is Good. Keep going, You should probably move it to a different section in order to gain more traction and attention, maybe spend more time editing as well.
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Poor Neymar, if only he had a system to stope injuryㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
el fic está bien, la traducción es basura , parece que lo tradujeron con Google y no corrigieron nada
Arthur you are doing a great job but I wanna ask if it's possible for you to write a fanfic about ronaldo or R9 it will be greatly appreciated
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1)Writing Quality: The presentation is a bit lacking and wrong names occasionally. It can be improved in my opinion. 2)Stability: I am not aware of it but seeing there are 400+ chaps I gave a 4/5. 3)Story Development: It's purrrfect. 4)Character design: Mc is written well but there are discrepancies in other players' character 5)World Background; I am living in a good world q(≧▽≦q)
good to have something to read. It gets boring the more you read as the protagonist keeps winning without any real challenge. Another thing is the lack of events outside of football that make reading entertaining.
I have read till 160 chapters. I enjoyed first 100 chapters, but later 10 chapter was too much. How to say, translation quality dropped sharply. And i begun to skip at least half of the chapter. Names of some clubs are Chinesed, for example Yun Da Bremen, originally its Werder Bremen. There are more mistakes there, i can't list them all. Story is good. Development is too not bad, characters and world good too. But translation... Its redacted MTL. Better than MTL, but should have been better. Good story per se, if there were good translation would have readed all of the chapters at the time i took to read these 160 chapters.
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