AI written work, the first 5 chapters are literally the same shit just rephrased in different words.
23 days ago
13
Vendora_05
Ahhhh what can I say? Seems like the usual AI work without large amounts of editing. Some things don't make a lot of sense and the premise itself is a bit shaky. Not to say that it is unreadable.. cause it definetely is readable but there is a lot of better stuff out there if you look carefully. Still if you have read all the other got fanfics on this website then you might aswell give this a go. Also: Farming views by posting three miniscule chapters in short order is a little annoying. Just wait until you have more output to post. Shouldn't be too hard no?
16 days ago
4
Ross_Faiello
Great story, some people just don't appreciate good work. They just write hate comments and now its dropped. If y'all don't have anything nice to say then keep it to yourself.
15 days ago
3
Jacob_Gamble
I liked the story I'm curious why you dropped er it
16 days ago
3
Harimata_mata
Hmmm think this story is good if u look in another side, the idea are unique and i don't care if u put AI in this story buat there are several weakness in the story first There are several chapters where the story is repeated over and over again and second too little dialogue between characters and the last each chapter contains too few words
20 days ago
3
Azazel_0919
Reveal Spoiler
21 days ago
3
Rakesh_Kumar_3235
This story have good potential. author i have advice for you if you want to use ai.
Tell ai what to write but never let ai write a story.
As a writer always know in which direction story should go
42 minutes ago
1
AkGreyback
This first time writing a bad review, After read up to Chapter 22 things started go down hill and becoming boring.
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17 days ago
1
TheSpiritOfWater
Дерьмо невозможное читать, а дисликсия не опровлание. (01010101010101001010101010101010101001010101010101010101010101010101010101010100101010101010101010101010010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010)
21 days ago
1
George_crazy_scot
Hello this is about the comments about AI, which I indeed use. It’s because of my dyslexia I struggle with writing so I use it to fill in the blanks and help with struture
The story is built on my ideas and vision but with actually writing it that’s the main challenge so sorry if it affects your reading I’ll try to make it easier.
All I ask is the keep that in mind when your reading this story.
23 days ago
0
George_crazy_scot
Hello this is about the comments about AI, which I indeed use. It’s because of my dyslexia I struggle with writing so I use it to fill in the blanks and help with struture
The story is built on my ideas and vision but with actually writing it that’s the main challenge so sorry if it affects your reading I’ll try to make it easier.
All I ask is the keep that in mind when your reading this story.
AI written work, the first 5 chapters are literally the same shit just rephrased in different words.
Ahhhh what can I say? Seems like the usual AI work without large amounts of editing. Some things don't make a lot of sense and the premise itself is a bit shaky. Not to say that it is unreadable.. cause it definetely is readable but there is a lot of better stuff out there if you look carefully. Still if you have read all the other got fanfics on this website then you might aswell give this a go. Also: Farming views by posting three miniscule chapters in short order is a little annoying. Just wait until you have more output to post. Shouldn't be too hard no?
Great story, some people just don't appreciate good work. They just write hate comments and now its dropped. If y'all don't have anything nice to say then keep it to yourself.
I liked the story I'm curious why you dropped er it
Hmmm think this story is good if u look in another side, the idea are unique and i don't care if u put AI in this story buat there are several weakness in the story first There are several chapters where the story is repeated over and over again and second too little dialogue between characters and the last each chapter contains too few words
Reveal Spoiler
This story have good potential. author i have advice for you if you want to use ai. Tell ai what to write but never let ai write a story. As a writer always know in which direction story should go
This first time writing a bad review, After read up to Chapter 22 things started go down hill and becoming boring. . .. ... .... ..... ......
Дерьмо невозможное читать, а дисликсия не опровлание. (01010101010101001010101010101010101001010101010101010101010101010101010101010100101010101010101010101010010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010)
Hello this is about the comments about AI, which I indeed use. It’s because of my dyslexia I struggle with writing so I use it to fill in the blanks and help with struture The story is built on my ideas and vision but with actually writing it that’s the main challenge so sorry if it affects your reading I’ll try to make it easier. All I ask is the keep that in mind when your reading this story.
Hello this is about the comments about AI, which I indeed use. It’s because of my dyslexia I struggle with writing so I use it to fill in the blanks and help with struture The story is built on my ideas and vision but with actually writing it that’s the main challenge so sorry if it affects your reading I’ll try to make it easier. All I ask is the keep that in mind when your reading this story.