Cannings of Destiny: Surge of Shadows
In a world transformed by the Great Unleashing, where 10% of the population wields extraordinary abilities known as “Cannings,” Evelyn “Viper” Reyes emerges as a silent assassin. Her energy manipulation powers make her a formidable force, but her heart burns with a singular purpose: to rescue her kidnapped sister, Lena, a rare Healer.
As Viper battles the shadowy Syndicate, led by the mind-controlling Malik Draven, she discovers that Cannings are both feared and exploited. Governments view them as threats, branding their abilities a curse. But Viper refuses to accept this fate. With Lena by her side, she fights to protect her kind, forging a destiny where their powers become a beacon of hope.
Amid shattered glass, twisted steel, and mind-bending confrontations, the Cannings of Destiny rise—a surge of shadows against a fractured world. Their journey is just beginning, and redemption lies on the edge of their abilities.
To be honest, the writing style is incredibly impressive. It only lacks two things, you need to learn how to write high paced enganging fight scenes and your writing lacks... i dont know how to put it, emotion? Make your charcters do what an actual person would have done. More depth, human like or relatable decisions and personality, then it would be perfect.