Marvel: X-98 Quantum Spider

This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story

Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.

I think the main problem with this story is that most of the characters are terrible, Alice is just a massive pushover, Felicia just makes the story really uncomfortable and shes pushy and gives stalker vibes.

Book has been reallllyyy good so far…. Hope author continues and doesn’t drop🙏🙏🙏