This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story
3 months ago
2
GaZe_Zero
Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.
3 months ago
4
Anant_Gupta_1245
Book has been reallllyyy good so far…. Hope author continues and doesn’t drop🙏🙏🙏
2 months ago
1
Yeshua_
I think the main problem with this story is that most of the characters are terrible, Alice is just a massive pushover, Felicia just makes the story really uncomfortable and shes pushy and gives stalker vibes.
This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story
Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.
Book has been reallllyyy good so far…. Hope author continues and doesn’t drop🙏🙏🙏
I think the main problem with this story is that most of the characters are terrible, Alice is just a massive pushover, Felicia just makes the story really uncomfortable and shes pushy and gives stalker vibes.