I liked the emojis the author used while writing. The writing style is a bit chaotic, making the story a bit hard to keep up with, but it also has a lot of energy and emotion, making the tone of the story very upbeat and positive overall (the comedy aspect of it really shines through). There's a lot of dialogue, which is not bad, but I would like if the author would describe more of the characters and scenery, etc. The story feels a bit like a script at some points, since the author uses colons sometimes when writing about who is speaking. This makes the story feel a bit inconsistent, since the dialogue is switching between two styles of writing, but it gets better a few chapters in. I think that a bit more paragraphing could be beneficial, but ultimately, it's the author's choice. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad. I have nothing to say about the characters, other than how interesting and human they were. They each had their own flaws and hilarious moments. The story was quite interesting, and I found myself finishing the whole 25 chapters.
a year ago
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ScarletFaire
It's a good story I recommend this book because it's unique the quality of the store is amazing and the characters design and the updating stability and the world is amazing and the characters design.
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I liked the emojis the author used while writing. The writing style is a bit chaotic, making the story a bit hard to keep up with, but it also has a lot of energy and emotion, making the tone of the story very upbeat and positive overall (the comedy aspect of it really shines through). There's a lot of dialogue, which is not bad, but I would like if the author would describe more of the characters and scenery, etc. The story feels a bit like a script at some points, since the author uses colons sometimes when writing about who is speaking. This makes the story feel a bit inconsistent, since the dialogue is switching between two styles of writing, but it gets better a few chapters in. I think that a bit more paragraphing could be beneficial, but ultimately, it's the author's choice. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad. I have nothing to say about the characters, other than how interesting and human they were. They each had their own flaws and hilarious moments. The story was quite interesting, and I found myself finishing the whole 25 chapters.
It's a good story I recommend this book because it's unique the quality of the store is amazing and the characters design and the updating stability and the world is amazing and the characters design.