Evomech

I will give the first review for my own novel, I wanted to write much more but it wouldn't be good if I accidentally wrote spoilers, the novel is very unique idea that I come up and I am still writing the story and making ideas to write in it. If you got any idea no matter how small or large I will see it, and will see if it goes well in the story then maybe I will add it too, ohh and I will post daily chapter so don't worry

I haven’t read much and I don’t really give reviews either but this opening really was phenomenal. The world background is top tier and the writing is so immersive and descriptive, but easy to read. Keep it up, author!

So far as I've read it (chapter 34), I think it's a good work overall. The pace is a little slow, but the Author is always attentive to details, something I really like and which makes up for the slow pace. Furthermore, if used well, the work has a vast universe with infinite possibilities to be incorporated into the work, depending only on the Author's creativity. In short, so far a good work, with a lot of room to improve and become a masterpiece, if the Author doesn't give up.

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It's beautiful... A spectacular work of art

The idea for the story is great. The dialogues are great. The humor is great. There are many descriptions that are great. However, there is quite a bit of bloated writing. Many sentences are not needed and I would rather read the monologue of the MC and what the system says and skip reading all the rest. It that wasn't a problem, I would give it 5 stars.

3 Chapters in, like always, and I have much too say about this novel It is absolutely amazing! The way I was able to imagine the location immediately thanks to the descriptions given by the author is immaculate, the way the first action scene is handled is perfection at its finest, just the sheer creativity found in this novel is something anybody would love to see. Although, a major problem I have is with the first chapter, filled with grammatical errors and improper usage of punctuation, so that gets a 4 stars. But other than that, the rest are perfect! TL;DR Give this sci-fi novel a read if you are one that enjoys action and robots!

Fantastic writing and Great characters. I really like the whole take on Aliens and Ai in this story. It brings a life to this Mc Kai who also has a system. The action scenes were splended and I progression was well paced. This was very interesting. This world gets more interesting the more you read it. (I may just be a sucker for non-human stuffs, but I cannot deny it was a good read).

seriously how do you guys learn how to write this beautifully. after reading it I wanted to dig a hole for myself . but I have one request dont' make the mc ' the boss behind the scenes ' ok.

If you're searching for a sleek and innovative twist on the everyday novel, this one is your perfect upgrade. Start reading—you'll be captivated and won't regret it!