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What would you do when you're faced with the ultimate being that is by true right Omnipotent, Omnipresent, and Omniscience?
What would you do when that very being tells you it will give you anything you ever wanted?
And what would you do when the ultimate being, devoid of greed, gives you the power to generate INFINITE MONEY?
This is the story of a boy who gets reincarnated in a new world filled with countless possibilities and dangerous beings.
Now, with the power to generate INFINITE MONEY in his hands, how will he survive in this world?
Will he be used by everyone else around him....
Or...
...will he buy them ALL?
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The guy in the poster is the future appearance of the Main Character.
This is my first novel so expect some bumpy chapters in first few.
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Ngl i thought it was just those copy & paste novels but nope this is much different and i like it very much. And i like that the mc behave like a child would behave. He feels real and emotionally And f**k the mother why would u do that to ur own child ps( i like that development though ) I like when the mc started going bullistic on his father just reading it u feel the mc's emotions , they where the emotions of a child. I give props for that U best not drop this author because you are on casp of makig a masterpiece here. Anyway good luck on the book hope to see more of that pls.
The first 20-30 chapters are ok but it starts eating away on your brain cells any later. The author probably has ADHD. Going off topic too add 3 unnecessary paragraphs to every paragraph. One single arc took about 30 chapters starting from chapter 20 and as i see it from the titles, it is gonna go on for a lot more. The writing style is annoying. Info dumps every now and then. It would be more practical to introduce new things when they are actually needed. Forinters or whatever were not needed here right now so it was pointless. The Academy introduction was pointless unless he went there or met someone from there. The plot is forced with the mother, the system shutting down and that Mary Woman in train station (you cant just kill a guy holding Royalty ID just cuz u suspect him, run a dna test, check account balance and confirm of he deserves to be royalty before fkin around). Anyway this was my review. This book got potential. Edit and change. Thats how it works. Imma drop it. Do let me know if it changes. Ill give it a read then. Thanks
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I like the story, it's entertaining. my problem is is the author continues to list stats that are pointless. nothing has changed. the character hasn't moved forward in their status and yet they'll list stats every chapter or twice in a chapter I've seen.
Well it's my book so I am going to Five Star it😁
Chapter a7 seems super forced and confusing about how it comes together like the mom sold him out somehow and was somehow pretending all along
1. Grammatical errors to hell and back 2. Unnecessary dialogue where the author tries to be "funny" and "relatable", but it just comes off as forceful and weird. Literally one of the earlier 20 something chapters mentioned the MC's worry about him getting shotacon gangraped 3. Despite being a 20 something grown man, the MC is childish, immature, and his stupidity has gotten him into avoidable situations more than once
A rushed mess. The conflicts are so contrived that I can’t take it seriously. The story seems to be trying to be funny most of the time and it just makes the sudden serious portions jarring rather than engaging. It seems to me that there is no real plan even this early in the story. That never bodes well for any future development. It’s just a thrown together mess.
thats it im sick of these very slow paced novels imagine the train scene alone almost 20chapters????for gods sake be more creative!i stopped reading this novel now...good plot but very very slow pace
Well I guess the concept is good but Mc is too much of a crybaby in the early chapters like do you expect a Full grown man to cry like that, Not very realistic, Character development I guess it's good, reality checks are kinda annoying but life is often like that, Annoying, so that kinda adds some realistic points.
was good till i had to pay to read😂😂😂.
Upload rate is good and stable if not perfect, information about world background is meh, blok has more than 30 chap and i think we deserve an Info dump but it is my personal opinion. As for character design, they have no depth but it is understandable since most of them are not even semi-permanent side characters but MC needs more depth (next arc can be the solution for this, something like training and buildimg foundation on a new continent, writing quality is good but a bit rough, story is not something original or dope but has potential just needs more details and depth that i hope soon would arrive.
Started of good but it just got confusing with a lot of side tracking and unnecessary scenes, tbh I couldn’t tell you the main plot since mc isn’t really driven by strength or has any goals