It’s god beginning but we need more to understand what happened
I say moooooore 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲
Again i say more chapters 💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔
7 months ago
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DaoistOv9hHP
For a beginner novel its going good but there some mistakes but not that bad also the the story development is going good so far and the characters have some great karma and a good base also so in my opinion i want to read the rest of the story and i hope it have some high expectations good luck for a beginner 👍
It’s god beginning but we need more to understand what happened I say moooooore 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 Again i say more chapters 💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔
For a beginner novel its going good but there some mistakes but not that bad also the the story development is going good so far and the characters have some great karma and a good base also so in my opinion i want to read the rest of the story and i hope it have some high expectations good luck for a beginner 👍