Chapter 137 Is This... the World You Envisioned?_4

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But after looking it over, Jiang Lu still didn't feel much.

"The plot is actually not bad, quite touching, but for an article that's meant to arouse desire as its initial intent, it's like turning an adult film into an art movie, somewhat missing the point. At most, I'd give it 5 points."

Then Jiang Lu read another book that was a higher level of Nascent Soul Stage original Aunty's Literature than the one he held in his hand, which the Bin State academy master used to demonstrate his Golden Core.

"It's become somewhat formulaic. Is the gentle aunty template popular in this world? Indulgently allowing the protagonist to act recklessly certainly makes it easy to stir up the reader's ambition, but it's somewhat aesthetically fatiguing when everything is cut from the same cloth, and swapping the names in the book with those from any other doesn't seem out of place; it lacks character distinction. I'd reluctantly give it 6 points."