The Tale of The Newly Born Rebel

The Tale of The Newly Born Rebel

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Author: Charming_liar
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In the mystical land of Alvaria, mana governs life, empowering magicians and augmentors differently. Magicians wield external mana, while augmentors enhance their bodies internally. Amidst diverse races and divine beings, a mysterious newcomer clad in golden armor challenges the established order, sparking conflict among gods and unraveling millennia-old truces. The Tale of The Newly Born Rebel delves into this clash of power, questioning the fragility of divine unity in the face of mortal strength and ambition.

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Moonflower414
Moonflower414

although the start was not what I hoped for but it intrigued me later on. The story is paced in at a good length and not much complaints. overall a good book!

8 months ago
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ArtbusterBeeze
ArtbusterBeeze

What you got here is a good story. the characters are amazing, the story is also well done and the style of writing was easy to flow through. The world building, I would say it somewhat builds progressively but there are detailed descriptions. And the Action kept me engaged to the story. Although this is good, in the beginning there is a few running on sentences. You would want to add a full stop to not have those sentences go on like that. This is the only problem iv'e noticed as everything else seemed on point. The Author does improve in later chapters though so I would still give it to them. I'll say this was still a worthwhile read.

7 months ago
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YellowEnn
YellowEnn

The plot itself is interesting, and the way it's delivered is great as well. It just needs to be edited more and refined. This is just an opinion of mine but the paragraphs are too long and it gives me a headache. Other than that I'm really interested.

7 months ago
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Charming_liar
Charming_liar

I'm pretty confident about my story my characters also I'm also a little descriptive which can be good and bad that being said my only problem is my updating stability but I'll try to work on it. So hope you enjoy this book

7 months ago
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