It's perfect. I really loved the way you mentioned the story. It feels like you are living in the moment yourself ,it feels great to read story like this . More support for the writer .
4 days ago
1
Aakanshya_Limbu_6714
The choice of words is appealing. Although I'm not an expert in novel writing, as a reader, I prefer to have a clear understanding of the subject matter. I would suggest selecting a specific genre for this novel. I am eager to see many more chapters.
wish you all the best.
a year ago
1
Kritika_Baral
I'm eagerly reading it . it's way beautiful than I thought and i missed some of the cheerful moments of childhood that story should have been mentioned . i hope you will write more better story like this and update fast .
a year ago
1
Anuska_Adhikari
Story line is amazing. different from the othe novels having similar stories. The story till chapter three has no negative character or negative things that happens in daily life. If u could include them it could be better. And the chapters should be updated more sooner.
It's perfect. I really loved the way you mentioned the story. It feels like you are living in the moment yourself ,it feels great to read story like this . More support for the writer .
The choice of words is appealing. Although I'm not an expert in novel writing, as a reader, I prefer to have a clear understanding of the subject matter. I would suggest selecting a specific genre for this novel. I am eager to see many more chapters. wish you all the best.
I'm eagerly reading it . it's way beautiful than I thought and i missed some of the cheerful moments of childhood that story should have been mentioned . i hope you will write more better story like this and update fast .
Story line is amazing. different from the othe novels having similar stories. The story till chapter three has no negative character or negative things that happens in daily life. If u could include them it could be better. And the chapters should be updated more sooner.