Omnipotent Ascension
[My WSA 2024 Entry Novel, please vote]
"Your sister has been kidnapped"
Kyo fell to his knees shocked at the news he was given about his sister's situation. He thought about what he needed to do in order to get her back.
Meet Mikami Kyo, a high schooler who's sister got kidnapped by an S-rank criminal and he had to join the Japanese Hunter Association in order to get stronger and have enough power to get her back.
In the midst of all that he finds out about his past and about the truth of the world they live in and why everything had to end up like this.
In time he gets some shocking revelations along the way.
Read on and find out how he deals with all of this and becomes the strongest he has to be in order to change all that he believes is wrong.
Nice job the author did here, not a lot of chapters yet but the begining of the story starts with captivating action which makes one want to read more, love it[img=recommend]
Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review. As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement. I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.). Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques. good luck.
Still in the early chapters but the power style and technique is very interesting. I’m looking forward to where this goes!
It has a good potential! But author needs to arrange it well and there are some words that needs spacing.