Reborn Son Goten, knowing the dangers of Dragon Ball, began to take a different path from Nobita in the original work. Super Saiyan is definitely not the end, Super Saiyan 2? Super Saiyan 3? Super Saiyan...
Despite being in the fanfiction section, this is a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic and you can definitely tell.
The story isn't particularly well written and filled with a lot of the clichés typically found in Chinese novels (especially xianxia), despite being set in Dragon Ball.
The translation is also terrible, especially when it comes to the characters names.
It feels like the translator just ran the raws through MTL and couldn't even be bothered to properly edit the result...
3 months ago
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Crimson_Fire
The storyline and plots are very good 👍.
However it is a pity that it finished too early.
23 days ago
1
Minato_99
not bad its difficoult find a fanfiction with goten protagonist
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Despite being in the fanfiction section, this is a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic and you can definitely tell. The story isn't particularly well written and filled with a lot of the clichés typically found in Chinese novels (especially xianxia), despite being set in Dragon Ball. The translation is also terrible, especially when it comes to the characters names. It feels like the translator just ran the raws through MTL and couldn't even be bothered to properly edit the result...
The storyline and plots are very good 👍. However it is a pity that it finished too early.
not bad its difficoult find a fanfiction with goten protagonist