Lurking Secrets Of A Billionaire

Lurking Secrets Of A Billionaire

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Author: Emmy_Nengia
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"Luciana's life is turned upside down when her foster parents, who murdered her real parents, rob her of her rightful heritage as empress. Subjected to a lifetime of mistreatment and betrayal, Luciana becomes wary of trusting others and determines to achieve her goals alone. However, her life takes a devastating turn when she catches her sister cheating with her boyfriend. Returning home to clear her head, she's faced with an unbearable reality: she's forced to marry a bankrupt billionaire to save her family's business, replacing her sister who was originally intended for the arrangement. With no other choice, Luciana signs the contract to protect her best friend, the only person who has ever shown her kindness. Unbeknownst to her, the 'bankrupt' billionaire is actually a rapidly rising trillionaire, and their contract marriage will lead Luciana to discover her true identity and reclaim her rightful heritage."

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Daoista98pbz
Daoista98pbz

Very good story and great characters Love it

3 months ago
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Hana_Chow
Hana_Chow

Interesting story but grammar is causing confusion.

3 months ago
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Steven_Chance
Steven_Chance

interesting story, this is an amazing book always wanting more.

2 months ago
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wendelt_thomas
wendelt_thomas

The story is great highly recommended and can’t stop talking about it

3 months ago
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julietallest
julietallest

I always dislike women fighting over a worthless man. If she had given the man the slap and walked out with dignity, I would have rated full stars.

3 months ago
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Heather_Lamonth_8103
Heather_Lamonth_8103

an intresting novel , with a very good plot

3 months ago
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Mr_O_
Mr_O_

First of all, I want to congratulate you. You’ve managed to create an atmosphere full of intense emotions, and that’s one of the strongest points of your story. Luciana is very well-developed in terms of her pain and inner conflicts, and the dialogue flows naturally, which adds realism to the scenes. Also, the plot of betrayal and secrets is quite intriguing and keeps the reader hooked. However, there are a few details you could refine to improve the flow. I noticed that in some parts, you switch between present and past tense, which can confuse the reader a bit. Also, while the emotions are well captured, there are moments where more detailed descriptions of the setting or actions are missing, which would help immerse the reader even more in the story. Lastly, in some moments of high tension, like Luciana’s confrontation with Jennifer and Richard, you could delve deeper into what she’s feeling in that moment to make the impact even stronger. In summary, the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments in narrative consistency and descriptions, you could take it to another level. 👌

19 days ago
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Maabu01
Maabu01

Nice work Author, I'm just a few chapters in and i can say your work is worth admiring, I'm definitely continuing. kudos Author👍

21 days ago
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KBKayboy
KBKayboy

love and recommend this book. keep it up author.

a month ago
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JWB_Kante
JWB_Kante

Good work from the author, keep updating please

a month ago
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MATT_Bro
MATT_Bro

intriguing story, looking forward to more.

2 months ago
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kevin_pones
kevin_pones

,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,very nice and very good

2 months ago
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Geeta_Devi_5919
Geeta_Devi_5919

lurking world best suvichar in gujarati english and sister waiting for your fairy tale of two or three times a day or two or three

3 months ago
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Sidhu_6622
Sidhu_6622

quite nice. Good to read in ur free time.

3 months ago
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Hawk_013
Hawk_013

keep up the good work.the story is nice.

3 months ago
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