I dropped, but you may ask why the five star review, because liking something and something being good can be two different things. even though i dropped due to my own taste. i was still compelled to give a five star review. This is well worth a read
3 months ago
26
DeathE
I was looking forward to the idea of the story, however, reality is often disappointing. I belive it's written by or with AI, the descriptions and the repetitive use of pointless phrases scream AI. Unless author is repeating phrases like "The immense weight of his future knowledge. . ." for no reason, it's AI.
3 months ago
17
Skepparn
Very clearly written by AI since it’s basically repeating itself 1/4 of the chapters is the same with different words, sometimes not even different words just plain the same
3 months ago
8
K0rv1nBl4ck
Its refreshing to see a story thats this good i hope to see more updates until this story is finished i would like to say please dont stop writing isee so many storys that are chinese translations lately that i became sick of them this is good
3 months ago
5
Lucius_SS
I found this story to be of superior quality.
3 months ago
4
ChangedReviewer
AI written POS story.
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2 months ago
3
manticore8262
The book is great so far keep updating things repeating is not a major issue but a minor one. grammarly is good keep using it I don’t have to do mental gymnastics to understand what is happening
3 months ago
3
KitKatKun
I like this, i like the story a lot... Please continue this story, it is quite pleasing...
one of the best fanfic ive read. the flaw this book have is few repeating sentence which a mild annoyance to me for bow. but if t keeps happening, i can see my future self might get frustrated by unnecessary annoyance.
for now its one of the most enjoyable fanfic ive read.
advice to author : the book title is cool but it probably have less publicity and hard to find for people who seek star wars fanfic
3 months ago
2
ElviniaTheElf
I'm at chapter 20. Even those some thoughts from MC are questionable, It was still a good read. The only thing I'm worried about it before starting to read is the lack of chapters. And after 20 chps in I'm still if not more worried, that how good the read was.
2 months ago
1
DevilOnUrShoulder
Reveal Spoiler
3 months ago
1
IWant2DieALilMore
It is honest a lot of fun too read this.
Its been a month, update it GOD DAMN IT!
a month ago
0
BarryBoneRaiser
Would give more but its been a while since the last chap. But overall, no mistakes, slow and steady character development and no op mc within 5 chapters. Overall i enjoyed this one and hope for more chapters in the future.
I dropped, but you may ask why the five star review, because liking something and something being good can be two different things. even though i dropped due to my own taste. i was still compelled to give a five star review. This is well worth a read
I was looking forward to the idea of the story, however, reality is often disappointing. I belive it's written by or with AI, the descriptions and the repetitive use of pointless phrases scream AI. Unless author is repeating phrases like "The immense weight of his future knowledge. . ." for no reason, it's AI.
Very clearly written by AI since it’s basically repeating itself 1/4 of the chapters is the same with different words, sometimes not even different words just plain the same
Its refreshing to see a story thats this good i hope to see more updates until this story is finished i would like to say please dont stop writing isee so many storys that are chinese translations lately that i became sick of them this is good
I found this story to be of superior quality.
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The book is great so far keep updating things repeating is not a major issue but a minor one. grammarly is good keep using it I don’t have to do mental gymnastics to understand what is happening
I like this, i like the story a lot... Please continue this story, it is quite pleasing...
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one of the best fanfic ive read. the flaw this book have is few repeating sentence which a mild annoyance to me for bow. but if t keeps happening, i can see my future self might get frustrated by unnecessary annoyance. for now its one of the most enjoyable fanfic ive read. advice to author : the book title is cool but it probably have less publicity and hard to find for people who seek star wars fanfic
I'm at chapter 20. Even those some thoughts from MC are questionable, It was still a good read. The only thing I'm worried about it before starting to read is the lack of chapters. And after 20 chps in I'm still if not more worried, that how good the read was.
Reveal Spoiler
It is honest a lot of fun too read this. Its been a month, update it GOD DAMN IT!
Would give more but its been a while since the last chap. But overall, no mistakes, slow and steady character development and no op mc within 5 chapters. Overall i enjoyed this one and hope for more chapters in the future.