Hole in the matrix

Overall, we're not given a lot yet and I might need to come back to this later, but some things needed to be stated before this gets to far along. The Good: The author knows where this is going and has a story they want to share. The Bad: Grammar is inconsistent, and a lot of it could be caught with a simple spellcheck. We haven't had much action, or really any, yet, but there are a lot of things missing. For example, when the MC gets slapped for grabbing a girl's "oranges," he only says he got slapped; we didn't get any reaction from him. So far, the only thing I know about the MC is that he has perfectly memorized some books about computers and related technologies as well as a System that seems to be very generic. Since this is early, we still have plenty of time to figure out the system. The dialogue is a disaster at times, but I can understand this since you can feel the author loves it. The Neutral: What I can say is that the author has a story they love, an ideal plot in their head, and the desire to give it to us. We can't see everything like you can, author-san. Reread what you've typed after you finish typing it with the mindset that we can only know what you show us. It's ok to hide some things or leave some things to our imagination, but relying on this all of the time will make it a different story depending upon the reader's perspective. I hope this helps a little bit and that you try something like Grammarly for simple grammatical corrections.