Springtime Shinobi

Frankly while the story is interesting to read the sad touch to it and minor drama was weird for my taste plus I couldn't get the energy to continue reading this knowing he's in a fkg illusion the whole time , kinda ruined the story...

Im gonna be Honest i read all chaps like 3 times didnt understand where right and left was the only thing i did get was he is in Infinite Tsukiyomi ( Genjustsu) except that i got nothig of the story plus it got boring after every chap. This dosent mean its bad but i will wait till you finished cooking

Finally. New novel ! Lets go massive chapter dump !

Honest review: I think many people leaving reviews are being too harsh and by all means too spoiled. The pace of the novel is solid; the greatest enemy of an author is lack of material. For the author to keep it entertaining and deepen the characters beyond the 2D traits that we already know about them, while making minor advancements in the plot each chapter should be the goal. I think people need to wake up and realize that this isn’t a crack fic that’s gonna end in 20-30 chapters and it has the potential to go quite far. So instead of being dopamine wish-fulfillment addicts; enjoy a refreshing plot that is new. As for the whole infinite tsukiyomi belief; JUST BECAUSE THE MC THINK THAT; it doesn’t mean that it’s true. As for the people spamming “dropped”; stop doing it. It’s already hard enough to find good fics here, it’s gonna be harder if every budding author is demoralized WITH EVERY CHAP THEY PUT OUT. I think this belongs on Fanfiction.net or even AO3.net. I don’t say this lightly at all. I think this is a great fanfic with a great idea and a great main character that interacts with plot in a realistic way. Now dear author as someone who has written some fics that have gone to perform well on this platform. Don’t be demoralized, just realize that the people who enjoy your writing are a lot more than the people commenting “dropped” because of the infinite tsukiyomi plot. I don’t know where you’re going with it and even with some predictions; I honestly don’t care as long as it’s something written well. I’m enjoying myself reading this fic and it’s something that I wasn’t expecting to binge on a random Tuesday morning. Keep going and I look forward to your next chaps and what your own unique spin brings to the Naruto fandom.

At the time of writing this review, I have read all the available chapters and can give a brief summary. The story is written in good language, making it a pleasure to read even through Google Translator. At the moment, only a small part of the Naruto world is included in the story - the academy and the Hyuga clan, but they are written well, the characters have their own personalities and goals, they are not extras for the main character. The only thing that confuses us at the moment is the question - is everything that is happening reality or is it an illusion? I understand that this may be the author's intention, the secret of his fanfic. But, honestly, this very concept, the possibility that everything that is happening is just an illusion of Madara-kun, puts me off reading But overall, the story is interesting and has potential; it’s worth spending your time on. Author, keep writing, you're doing great :) Google translator

Feels overly dramatic to me. Just not my type. Too much unnecessary involvement with hyuga. The whole situation did not really make sense to me and felt very far-fetched. But I don't know some people enjoy this type of story so try it out and make your own decision.

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So.... Listen this story can have two route 1. Mc is a regressor and he thinks he is in infinite tsukyomi 2. he really is in an illuson. Author will bamboozel at the last either giving Mc a tragic ending saying it was infinite tsukyomi and marrying hinata off to naruto or killing or whatnot. Or will tell he is a regressor.I dont know cause infinite Tsukyomi makes us live our desires right?

is this a MTL translation or your original fic ??? author