After arriving at Qin Academy, Sin Ein Luo became a disciple. but what awaited him was a trimuph,
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Give me ideas in comments, I will accept them and integrate them in my story if they are reasonable enough.
not mentioned elements:Fast-paced, Personality underdevelopment, 'What the heck happened here?' type story, the longer the novel worser the plot becomes, I am gonna do what my writer's heart and brain say
Author here, I hope No One rates my Novel 5 stars other than me.