This is the first review for this story, so I think I need to not destroy its
chances.
World background
there was no world background on the story, but the first words gave me the impression of something interesting, so gave it 5 stars for that
character design
there were no characters, so I gave it a fairly 1 star
Stability of updates
the story has only two chapters, they were published in almost the same time, so I considered this as not bad, and I gave it 5 stars for that
Story development
the story has only two chapters they are "the beginning" and "the end", and they feel like something is missing between them
(the whole story, maybe?)
And the chapters are super short too
writing quality
I asked the author, and they told me that this story was just a silly test to ensure that publishing a novel is possible. So I think I can't even talk about the topic or even complete this review because it's useless
This is the first review for this story, so I think I need to not destroy its chances. World background there was no world background on the story, but the first words gave me the impression of something interesting, so gave it 5 stars for that character design there were no characters, so I gave it a fairly 1 star Stability of updates the story has only two chapters, they were published in almost the same time, so I considered this as not bad, and I gave it 5 stars for that Story development the story has only two chapters they are "the beginning" and "the end", and they feel like something is missing between them (the whole story, maybe?) And the chapters are super short too writing quality I asked the author, and they told me that this story was just a silly test to ensure that publishing a novel is possible. So I think I can't even talk about the topic or even complete this review because it's useless